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[Since it seems more unlikely (especially given my laptop difficulties) that I'll finish the 3RD part or work on the 4TH (introduction to Robin), I figure I might as well post this here as well. Around Christmas I started trying to write 2 pages a part (short & manageable!) of Lorel meeting Alfred and what-not. I wanted to get out of my 'Sentence. Sentence. Sentence.' thing that I've fallen into (which annoys me), and just to write something no matter how poor quality I thought it was (I've had other things I've wanted to write, but I can't get into the mindset for it.). But anxiety & the pointlessness feelings are so that I don't feel I have the capacity to write any more.
Originally posted on December 20TH, 2013 @ 10:14PM, January 6TH, 2014 @ 04:14AM, & June 14TH, 2014 @ 02:39PM
This is how Lorel & Alfred met. I have ideas for, and used to think of writing out little adventures they had as partners, but I doubt I ever will. But this part here is about their first meeting. For those that don't know; Alfred is Lorel's spouse that was murdered, and also was her teacher & partner at the inquiry agent office they set-up (L & A). His murder was the reason she started her quest for vengeance, and why she took on the persona of L.S. Cassius & went to The 'Neath/London.]
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-----PART #1-----
( 'Your trousers are wet.'. It was a statement, a completely true but unexpected statement. The young man turned and grinned. )
-----PART #2-----
( After she had sat down, letting the cup warm into her fingers, inhaling the tea's steam, she finally snorted and told her uncle of her evening. )
-----PART #3 (unfinished)-----
( 'This is small, so the staff might have to launder items themselves. Larger establishments-or well to do-contract out. Or we are thought foolish.' )
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[Part 3 was going to lead into them exchanging letters and meeting whenever they were in the same area. And part 4 was going to be her meeting Robin and him being so amused at the type of woman his brother 'brought home', and how they formed a little group of detective siblings.
I've also added 2 things to AO3. And edited some Friends Groups to make it feel more safe to enable comments again (if you can't see something with a main account, try a secondary one. I never removed anyone so I know my Protected entries can still be seen).]
EDIT---
[Alfred drawing!]
Originally posted on December 20TH, 2013 @ 10:14PM, January 6TH, 2014 @ 04:14AM, & June 14TH, 2014 @ 02:39PM
This is how Lorel & Alfred met. I have ideas for, and used to think of writing out little adventures they had as partners, but I doubt I ever will. But this part here is about their first meeting. For those that don't know; Alfred is Lorel's spouse that was murdered, and also was her teacher & partner at the inquiry agent office they set-up (L & A). His murder was the reason she started her quest for vengeance, and why she took on the persona of L.S. Cassius & went to The 'Neath/London.]
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-----PART #1-----
( 'Your trousers are wet.'. It was a statement, a completely true but unexpected statement. The young man turned and grinned. )
-----PART #2-----
( After she had sat down, letting the cup warm into her fingers, inhaling the tea's steam, she finally snorted and told her uncle of her evening. )
-----PART #3 (unfinished)-----
( 'This is small, so the staff might have to launder items themselves. Larger establishments-or well to do-contract out. Or we are thought foolish.' )
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[Part 3 was going to lead into them exchanging letters and meeting whenever they were in the same area. And part 4 was going to be her meeting Robin and him being so amused at the type of woman his brother 'brought home', and how they formed a little group of detective siblings.
I've also added 2 things to AO3. And edited some Friends Groups to make it feel more safe to enable comments again (if you can't see something with a main account, try a secondary one. I never removed anyone so I know my Protected entries can still be seen).]
EDIT---
[Alfred drawing!]
